Thursday, March 27, 2014

CKK #49 Results



1. None of the comments during the kukai are from the kukai coordinator. Comments and votes of the players are anonymously stated
2. Poems remain the copyright of individual writers

Players: 1.Anitha Varma, India; 2. Ajaya Mahala; 3. Rita Odeh; Nazareth, Israel; 4. Ramesh Anand, India; 5. Gheorghe Postelnicu, Romania; 6. Ralf Bröker, Germany; 7. Diane Mayr, USA; 8. Keith A. Simmonds T & T; 9. Marie-Alice Maire , France; 10. Lavana Kray, Romania; 11. Arvinder Kaur, India; 12. Neelam Dadhwal, India; 13. Shloka Shankar, Bangalore, India; 14. Yesha Shah, India; 15. Eduard TARA, Romania; 16. Samar Ghose, Australia; 17. Catherine J.S. Lee, USA; 18. Kashinath Karmakar, India; 19. Leo R Vinay, India; 20. Robert Kania, Poland; 21. Quentin Clingerman, USA; 22. Franklin Magalhaes, Brazil; 23. Yanda Cox, Trinidad and Tobago; 24. Cezar Ciobica,


FIRST PLACE

13
heated argument...
she nurses her ego
in the shower
--Shloka Shankar Bangalore, India
Votes: 541*** Points: 16
Comments: Vivid, cannot miss the point of cooling down!




SECOND PLACE
19
sandcastle —
a wave darts
past my feet
--Vinay Leo R. Bangalore, India.
Votes: 232*** Points: 14
Comments:



THIRD PLACE

14
ma's trembling hands--
the touch that still melts my
worries away
--Yesha Shah, India
Votes: 54**** Points: 13
Comments:


18
after lovemaking-
capturing the window moon
with every smoke ring
--kashinath karmakar,India
Votes: 322*** Points: 13
Comments:




RESULTS CONTINUES

1
open casement…
raindrops cool on my
fevered brow
--Anitha Varma, Kerala, India.
Votes: 21**** Points: 04
Comments: I can almost feel it!


2
bumpy flight over
mothers unfasten hands
around the kids
--Ajaya Mahala, Pune, India
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:


3
hazy sun...
painting my dream on
an eagle's wing
--Rita Odeh, Nazareth, Israel
Votes: 331*** Points: 12
Comments:


4
still pond –
fading from its centre
this stormy cloud
--Ramesh Anand. Bangalore, India.
Votes: 23**** Points: 08
Comments: Absolutely brilliant imagery!


5
snowman's carrot nose -
between the fresh snowdrops
is cooling down
--sTOPs Romania
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:


6
after the meeting chill in a church
--Ralf Bröker
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:


7
Thursday at six
the bar full of chatter
...just one more
--Diane Mayr
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:


8
Ash Wednesday
after King Carnival's reign...
cool down retreat
--Keith A. Simmonds
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:


9
contest happy end
I can now smell
the first violets
--Marie-Alice MAIRE , France
Votes: 1***** Points: 01
Comments:


10
cool-down session-
the crooked eagle and the moon
back to back
--Lavana kray-Romania
Votes: 11**** Points: 03
Comments:


11
homecoming -
a taste of moonlight
in our wine
--Arvinder Kaur, Chandigarh,India
Votes: 52**** Points: 09
Comments:


12
midsummer...
under a fan
the shuffling of old newspaper
--Neelam Dadhwal, Chandigarh, India
Votes: 611*** Points: 11
Comments:


15
leaving the beach –
the sand in my sandals
cools down
--Eduard TARA, Romania
Votes: 221*** Points: 09
Comments: Clear. I can feel the coolness between my toes.


16
afterwards
still in each other's embrace—
moon shadow
--Samar Ghose, Australia
Votes: 32**** Points: 07
Comments:


17
finding a balance . . .
the moon halfway between
here and there
--Catherine J.S. Lee, Eastport, Maine, USA
Votes: 5***** Points: 05
Comments:



20
cold night -
I try to cool down
after a first date
--Robert Kania, Poland
Votes: 2*1*** Points: 05
Comments:


21
Stick your head outdoors
Breathe the frosty air of March
Cool down very quick
--Quentin Clingerman
Votes: **1*** Points: 03
Comments:


22
Quiet lake -
the swan is its own boat.
Ash Wednesday.
-- Franklin
Votes: 3***** Points: 03
Comments:


23
Yellow morning kiss
As I peep through shades of green
Misty blues beckons
--Yanz
Votes: ****** Points: 00
Comments:


24
cooling down
the quarrel between parents -
double rainbow
--Cezar C.
Votes: 5***** Points: 05
Comments: Last line suggests both harmony and beauty in cooling down.



Saturday, March 1, 2014

CKK# 49


We find ourselves many times in a situation of hype, the adrenalin flows we are caught up, we cheer, we applaud, we do a happy dance; or we swear, we curse, we kick stones; or whatever. When its all over we need to find our equilibrium point, we need to 'cool down' and this what Kukai #49 is about; regaining balance, cooling down, inhaling...

Dear (kuyu) haiku friends, you are invited to participate in The Caribbean Kigo Forty Ninth Kukai. The THEME is 'cool down' Send one haiku, written in the style of your choice; via e-mail

Example:-
carnival over...
the drive to Maracas beach
swamped in verdancy

-- gillena cox, 2011


Deadline for sending entries is March 10th 2013
Deadline for sending votes is March 20th 2013

A voting list will be e-mailed to all players

Voting:
Votes to be scored using a total of 6points; voters must use all 6 points
Example:-
Haiku#76………3pts
Haiku#34………2pts
Haiku#8………1pt

the example given is just one of several ways you can allot your points

Comments during voting are encouraged but must be limited to 3 lines. When published, these comments and votes will be given anonymous listings.

Ballots:(votes and comments) to be sent by e-mail

The results will be published here at Caribbean Kigo Kukai. After results have been posted, any comments
you wish to make can be posted directly here at the blog just click on comments at the end of the post

much love
gillena